i want you to be the glow on my face...
i want you to be the stride in my pace...
i want you to be the truth in my lies...
i want you to be the twinkle in my eyes...
i want you to be the love in my heart...
i want you to never from me stay apart...
i want you to be the breeze in my hair...
i want you to be the joy of my share...
i want you to be the nostalgia in my tears...
i want you to be the best of my peers...
i want you to be the moon of my night...
i want you to be the reason of delight...
i want you to be the dimple in my smile...
i want you to be around all the while...
this might sound selfish and maybe thats what u'd see...
but cant help it---i want you to be the best in me!! :)
[ahh!! what better way than to start the new year with a whiff of romantic poetry in the air to heighten ur curiosity! ;)]
glow of your face- use a face cream...
ReplyDeletestride in your pace - tone your calf muscle
truth in your lies- and dig for the lie in your truth
twinkle in my eyes.. oh thats romantic
breeze in your hair.- ill blow
moon of your night - can i be the star on a no moon day?
if i lose a couple of tooth, ill have dimple for sure..
the last line kicked me out..
enjoyed it..
pri.. that rocked..
happy new year
i want u to be a sentence in my poem...
ReplyDeletehey u said i want you to be the best in me!! :) not me..
:P u rock Pri...
a beautiful start to d new yr indeed...i wonder whoz inspirin ya
ReplyDelete**i want you to be the truth in my lies...
i want you to be the twinkle in my eyes...
my fav lines!!!!
lovely..
ReplyDelete:)
Beautiful ...
ReplyDeleten thats a masterpiece! :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteWishing for a very Happy You in the new year!
ReplyDeletePoems aren't my cup of tea you know. So no comments ;)
Pommes aren't my cup of tea either. Cos they are fruits.
@ chriz
ReplyDelete///glow of your face- use a face cream...///
well they say, no face cream can bring about the kinda glow u have when ur in love...not even the 'dove' soap which claims to be a close substitute :D
///stride in your pace - tone your calf muscle///
ahh nothing can match the disoriented yet pompous gait of a person in love :p
///truth in your lies- and dig for the lie in your truth///
there can be truth in my lies but dont doubt the unadulterated truth i speak :-/
///twinkle in my eyes.. oh thats romantic///
thankyou..its a shame u found ONLY this line romantic though..hmpf!!
///breeze in your hair.- ill blow///
or maybe we could get a table-fan..would guarantee a much better effect :p
///moon of your night - can i be the star on a no moon day?///
NO! NO! NO! i want NO eclipse!! *throws a tantrum*
///if i lose a couple of tooth, ill have dimple for sure..///
naah il'l rather have it the easier way :)
///the last line kicked me out..///
thankgod! or else i swear i would *rolling eyes*
///enjoyed it..
pri.. that rocked..///
ahh...at last!! thankyou :D
and wish u a very happy new year too!
@ the rat
thankyou dear..and a sentence in ur poem?? im flattered!! :)
@ mayz
thanks mayank...the inspiration has come from great writers like u who make sure im always in love with 'love'...
so just thought i should try my hand at romantic poetry :)
@ ankita
ReplyDeletethanks :)
@ pratz
thankyou :)
@ trinaa
thanks..im flattered :)
@ stupidosaur
///Wishing for a very Happy You in the new year!///
thanks and wish u the same :)
///Poems aren't my cup of tea you know. So no comments ;)
Pommes aren't my cup of tea either. Cos they are fruits.///
LOL! what about pomerians?? u like them? they are dogs btw :P
such a lovely post... And I just read in ur comment above, 'poems aren't my cup of tea'.. you kidding.. this is beautiful.
ReplyDeletewhen its heartfelt, its always magical. Thats what I feel anyway
am i jealous?? :P
ReplyDeletehappy new year dear :)
and may thi year make "him" the best in "you" :)
lifted my spirits and reminded me of someone.lovely poem priyanka!!!!!hope to read more!!!!
ReplyDeleteVery Nice :)
ReplyDeleteYou bet. You could not have started the new year in any better manner... with love in the air :)
ReplyDeleteNice post.
@ dr roshan r
ReplyDeletehaha...thanks but the statement u read in the above comment was made by 'stupidosaur' not me! i was just quoting his words before replying to them :D
i do pen a lot of poetry a lot of which has been blogged on 'nostalgic moments' too...dunno if im good at it...but yess like u said, i too believe that when the heart feels, the mind writes :)
@ sawan
thankyou...may ur wish come true and may fiction become reality :D
wish u a very happy and successful new year too :)
@ shruti
thanks..im glad u liked it...and im flattered...what better compliment than being able to bring back pleasant memories? :)
@ pavi!!
thanks :)
@ i walk alone!!
thankyou...and wish u a happy new year :)
hey..happy new yr..hope u ve a great yr ahead of u
ReplyDeletewell written... this blogging is throwing up quite a few wonderful poets up !!!!
ReplyDeleteI want "you" to be all this
ReplyDeletebut,
I need "you" to be "you"
more importantly
I realize
I need "you"
:)
awww... that was some sweet romantic poetry here!!! a great way to start a new year :)
ReplyDeletemade me smile, thanks for that!
@ maverick
ReplyDeleteheyyy wish u the same buddy...nice to see u..its been really a long time :)
@ hitchwriter
thanks...that compliment sure made my day! :D
@ rambler
woww...now thats romantic!!
beautiful lines..lucky is the girl u'd say that to :)
@ lena
thanks to you..glad it made u smile :)
WOW... super...
ReplyDeletelooks like am not the only one to do so :)
Have a lovely year mate... take care.. cheers...
@ arv
ReplyDeleteofcourse not..we all are romantics at heart :)
u have a great year ahead too!
i loveddd these lines
ReplyDelete"i want you to be the dimple in my smile...
i want you to be around all the while..."
love u pri :)