August 16, 2009

tomorrow never comes

everytime she spoke to him,
a little more of her soul she bared...
and everytime he spoke to her,
he wondered if he really cared...


today shattered he sits and weeps,
defeated by an evil stroke of fate...
she lies there lifeless still in love,
he has realised he cares but a bit too late!!

7 comments:

  1. oh... this is a sensitive one!!
    Nice.

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  2. beautifully expressed...just loved it!!Short and sweet...

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  3. Yep, sometimes we figure out that we really want something after we lose it. Sigh.
    Nicely done!

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  4. @ blogboy, aditi, athivas
    thankyou!

    @ sawan
    :)

    @ raaji
    yes, realisations can change life in a positive way but only if they arrive at the right time...

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  5. does everything runs out of time for those who have no capability to see beyond...

    life is tragic indeed.

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if you think differently, go right ahead & express yourself..you might help me grow up in the process and i would be thankful.
if you think alike, you can ofcourse talk too..you might help me feel less alone in the crowd and i would be grateful.
Whatever you might think, i would love to know your reaction!!!