My body trembled against yours,
skin to skin you held me close...
as our breaths sang in perfect unison,
to create a beautiful symphony of souls,
that day when we fought against all odds...
and got it even...
Better friends or bitter lovers,
sans knowing we had made amends...
you clasped my shivering hand in yours,
as I melted in your trusting arms,
that day when we fought against all odds,
and got it even...
A thousand arguments left half finished,
were put to rest in pent up passion...
the air was tense-our love at ease,
as I gazed into your longing eyes,
that day when we fought against all odds,
and got it even...
A bond of commitment it had changed into,
and nothing more I could have asked...
you carved your initials in my heart,
as I fiddled with my wedding ring,
that day when we fought against all odds,
and got it even...
True true pri. Fantastic. Awesome. I read more than 100 times. Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteAlways a pleasure to visit this blog and find something brilliant than the previous ones......simply fantastic!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the opportunity to have a glimpse of that creative mind :)
Beautiful, full of love and majestically passionate!!
ReplyDeletebrilliant!!
ReplyDeletesizzling with love and passion, this is one helluva poem! Hell, it is more like a wedding vow! Loved it.
"the day we fought against all odds, and got it even..."
*bows down*
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this is beautiful... I have nothing more to say :)
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ReplyDeletethanks...it feels good to have you all to share my thoughts with :)
if one moment intellegince can give way to emotions , if heart is allowed to rule emotions instead of dissecting it with intellegince and memory, ...
ReplyDeleteif the poetry holds true in real life then congratulations for allowing life to experience.
@ rm
ReplyDeletewell, my poetry is always inspired from real life...but not necessarily mine :)
oh my god, what a gorgeous poem. I sighed out loud.
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