January 04, 2012

Moody 'water' colors...


Whispering clouds and thundering skies,
lightening dazzles the night so shy,
as I wander lonely on the street,
I notice people around me scurrying by...

The pitter-patter of these drops of rain
The scent of the earth much divine
The musical sway of leaves on trees
Wild flowers with a freshness that shines...

I meet a girl with olive skin,
with a smile that does not meet the eye,
a deep sadness she must harbour there,
her heart seems burdened by a lie...

In silence as I watch her restrain,
I wonder how she hides her pain,
and then it dawns on me--she is trying,
but in the rain, who can see her crying?

Next, I meet a man complaining,
who frets and sulks because its raining,
talks about the muck and mud,
like an angry cow chews cud...

I notice his shirt---its dirty now,
a car has splashed a puddle somehow,
his mood is foul, his anger fair,
it's raining, but he does not care...

As I walk by another lane,
I see a man with his lady love,
sheltering her from the lashing wind,
a match made by the heavens above...

Dancing and jumping mad with glee,
soaking wet and drenched insane,
I greet them, children of innocent age,
oblivious to worry or worldy gain...

Someone trying to hide his pain,
someone revealing his disdain,
sometimes a blessing, for some a bane,
it's a wave of magic---this January rain!

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Writers note: There was a sudden downpour in my head, and as Henry Wadsworth Longfellow rightfully said, "The best thing one can do when its raining is to let it rain" ;)

cheers!!!

19 comments:

  1. Rain always brings the best out of poets :)
    Extremely beautiful Pri :)

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  2. aah this january rain!..but its not raining here!

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  3. Nice downpour of those 'misty' words.........very well written.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  4. wow what a beautiful poem :)
    Magical :) and u made my day darling :)

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  5. And here I am, waiting for them to drop by here too :)

    Send a few clouds this way too doc.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  6. @ elixir of life
    thankyou :)

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  7. @ serendipity
    thanks dear..i think rain brings out the best in everyone---poets and non poets alike ;)

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  8. @ ana treek
    ummm...you want me to send some?
    frankly, it just drizzled for a day.but caused quite a downpour in my head :D

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  9. @ vyankatesh
    danke! long time :)

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  10. @ anonymous
    always a pleasure :)

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  11. @ lady whispers
    im flattered i did :)

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  12. @ anshul
    okies...on their way! ;-)

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  13. One of the best I have read on rains..and its effect on people...and this January rain definitely showered some blessing on to you.. :-)

    The last verse sums it up perfectly.. :-)

    Thank you and Good Luck for rest of the year..

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  14. beautifully written...loved those rhymes...keep penning :)

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