February 02, 2012

Untitled---for the one who need not be named...

Unaccepted apologies...

Silent tears...

False allegations...

Hesitant explanations...

Stony indifference...

Blame games...

Uncomfortable numbness...

Elusive memories...


Friendship that once was...

Friendship that always will be...

Ego that never was...

Ego that now is...


You hesitate to accept my apology because you think history might repeat itsself...

I hesitate to try too hard because I am sure it will...

You think i dont care enough to change...

I think you have changed too much to care...



'Me' missing 'you' hurts but not half as much as 'you' misunderstanding 'me' did!!!

19 comments:

  1. Parallel lines
    were not
    born that way.

    They were sinusoidal
    till
    the enthusiasm
    and belief
    waned
    asymptotically,
    flattening out.

    With some element of shock,
    it is still possible
    they may fibrillate
    and
    meet some day.

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  2. Lovely post Pri, so beautifully written.

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  3. Sigh I can relate to all emotions and life...

    Beautifully written girl :)

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  4. Universal relevance I must say !! Nicely expressed the usually un-discussed emotions !!

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  5. u need to let go:) coz life goes on and whatever happens is for our betterment. i knw these are typical lines but they confine within them d ultimate truth too!


    sarah

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  6. @ Ugich Konitari
    That thought is priceless!!!
    I loved the way you put it---thankyou for sharing it with me! :)

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  7. @ Nidz
    thanks nidz...its been a long time.hows you? :)

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  8. @ lady whispers
    I guess each one of us has has had that friend/loved one who walked out but never away...
    Somewhere deep within every one of us has lived that story which seems forgotten but never is :)

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  9. @ Nitin Jain
    I agree...nostalgia is an universal emotion :)

    Thanks for dropping by!

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  10. @ priya joyce
    Arn't we always doing that? and then again, have memories stopped surfacing up once in a while---or perhaps always a little more often than needed?? :)

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  11. Its more than just a sad, beautiful poetry.
    Hang in there, I know it hurts for now, but, this too shall pass.

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  12. Have sent u mail.

    See :

    http://kavitalihi.blogspot.in/2012/02/plot.html

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  13. "Friendship that once was...
    Friendship that always will be..."

    Beautifully written & a truly nostalgic creation of a thoughtful mind.......thanks for sharing!

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  14. Letting go, is like trying to force a thing out of the memory. They all forget that memory is like quick-sand, the more you struggle to get it out, the more it sinks deeper inside. Better to just let things be..

    BTW, the chemistry of life says that 'conversion of a stranger to friend is an irreversible process'.

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  15. I like your poem! It is really nice and sad.
    When I read it, my eyes are full of tears...

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if you think differently, go right ahead & express yourself..you might help me grow up in the process and i would be thankful.
if you think alike, you can ofcourse talk too..you might help me feel less alone in the crowd and i would be grateful.
Whatever you might think, i would love to know your reaction!!!