January 23, 2008

the counting game...

I wanna make my life count
all of you who are here to stay...
all the trials which make me go on...
all the smiles which come to my lips...
every time a new dream is born...

I wanna make my life count
all these moments i will never forget...
the memories engraved in this heart of mine...
every time i stumble and miss a step,
but something makes sure i do just fine...

I wanna make my life count
all the battles it makes me fight,
some with the self making me stronger...
every angel who makes sure i am safe,
when at times i feel i cant go on any longer...

I wanna make my life count
all the tests it puts me through...
every small triumph along the way...
every dark night i spend crying...
only to appreciate the new colours of day...

I wanna make my life count
all the blessings i get as gifts...
all the smiles i manage to spark...
every time a small lil gesture of mine,
evokes for someone a sunbeam in the dark...

I wanna make my life count
the long walks i share hand in hand...
those who wont leave me stranded around the bend...
each time someone thinks of me when im away...
every time im remembered by a friend...

I wanna make u count o'life!!
my every feeling...every thought...every word...
each night...each noon...each passing dawn...
all the smiles,tears and laughs i share...
i know u'll miss me lots when im gone...

29 comments:

  1. Keep em counting;)

    And keep it rollin;)

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    Aj ke liye itni counting kaafi hai :D

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  3. Oh boy.. that would be terrabytes of data!!

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  4. subtle....
    ur tagged http://kookeetail.blogspot.com/2008/01/tag-to-rescue.html
    cheers

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  5. loved it...

    muwwwah!!!!!! :)

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  6. lets count....
    lovely post..
    :)

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  7. Beautifully written.
    I love the pictures of children on your site :)

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  8. whats the highest number you want to acheive - put that and start counting backwords....

    very well written - liked it :)

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  9. so beautiful! U wrote this? WOW!

    I dunno if my life counts to anyone else, but it does to me...and thats all that matters.

    HUGGGGGGGGGGGGGZ!
    Keshi.

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  10. where are you off to? are you not gonna blog no more? loved the verses. but please don't stop writing pri. :)

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  11. nice one...
    Is tht you who have written this..

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  12. @ scribbler
    well somehow i knew u wud say that ;)

    @ abhishek khanna
    bery phunny! :p

    @ j
    heehee...cant let life get away easy can i? ;)

    @ alohomora
    will take up the tag soon dear...
    thanks for tagging :)

    @ anonymous
    glad u liked it...

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  13. @ nisha
    thanks :)
    how would u do the counting?? *wondering*...:D

    @ frances
    thanks...its nice to have u drop by :)

    @ ceedy
    thanku bery much...its been a long time u complimented me ;p..heehee.

    @ keshi
    yes dear...its original...blogged down straight from the heart by urs truly :)...
    and keshi...in the end its only the person in the mirror who matters...:)but who dosent like to be remembered and missed isnt it??

    live life kingsize!!
    hugzzz

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  14. @ utopia
    heyy whatever gave u that impression??
    blogsville is not gonna get rid of me soo soon ;p...heehee

    @ blogboy
    thanks blogboy..glad u liked it...and yes i wrote it :)

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  15. lovely poem...u have got talent babes :)

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  16. A very beautiful poem and a wonderful ending.

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  17. awesome poem...dnt v words to write out for the amazing poem...loved it :)

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  18. i second all the comments above.

    love it!!

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  19. wow ur some writer girl! great stuff.


    btw check out my latest post and plz do add to it ok lol!

    Keshi.

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  20. @ khushi
    thanks dear :)

    @ cosmicjoy
    thanks cosmic..its been a long time..great to see u :)

    @ geet
    thanks for dropping by geet...was 'JWM' inspired by u? ;)

    @ keshi
    thanks dear...
    ok am on my way there...:)

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  21. yup i wanna make life count too .. have been counting ofcourse ..

    ;)

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  22. am not counting.. have loads of counting to do otherwise.. :(
    by thw way chk out this blog, u might like it!!
    Labile Moods
    its more up ur alley, i think!!

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  23. was a nice read....

    smtime i wonder when i will write a poem, not my glass of wine....

    stime i take time out of my so ruthless life to thank all those who matter most in my life.... that make me count those ppl atleast.

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  24. @ anuj
    thats cool...another player to the 'counting game' :D

    @ sam
    heyy sure...will check it out soon...thanks for sharing :)

    @ vikas
    thats real nice...we should never wait for 'tomorrow' when it comes to saying thanks to people who matter to us :)
    nice to have u hop on here...
    seeya around!

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  25. 1 2 cha cha.. i love d way pri writes n counts...cho chweet...
    Hugs n lodsa love :-*

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  26. @ mad orchid
    heyy thanks dear :)
    now looks like someone is in the 'chachacha' mood ;p

    hugzz :)

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  27. :)

    you hav a srene blog...thnx fr droppin by...

    loved this post :)

    we gotta make it count!

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  28. @ priya
    nice o u to drop by...much appreciated :)
    seeya around...
    happy blogging...

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