June 28, 2018

'Always & forever' (a short story)

Miles away, living in a different city, Ajay missed her terribly...sometimes even more than family. His family would often tease him about it; that he spent more time with her than with them. But what was presumed to be puppy love had blossomed into a symbiotic dependency over the years.


Now in a new city, lonliness felt like a visceral pain every time he entered his empty apartment. He had promised he'd come back for her as as soon as he had settled in at his workplace. Until then, they'd have to make do with webcam and phone.

She'd always been a patient girl. Confident of her love, she was sure he'd never leave her in the lurch. Ajay still remembered the look in her beautiful brown eyes when he told her he had to leave for another city. It had pained him as much as it had saddened her...the moment of separation outside the airport.

The silence in his empty apartment made him miss her even more. He missed every moment of the time spent with her---those lovely walks they took together, the wordless understanding they would sometimes share, the comfort of her cozy hugs. Two weeks here and he'd realised why they say absence made the heart grow fonder.

His nostalgic pinings were interrupted by the chime of his computer.  8 pm; it was time for the daily rendezvous with his sweetheart. Enthusiastically, he switched on his webcam.

"Yo bro! Ready for your date?" said his brother, grinning on the other side of the computer screen.

"Dude, don't waste my time. Where is she?" Ajay frowned, straining his neck looking for his beloved.

He could hear her now. Music to his ears. Excited yelps reached their crescendo as the webcam was shifted and an enthusiastic golden retriever came slowly into focus, wagging her soft furry tail in excitement.
Ajay's joy knew no bounds, as his little darling climbed up his brother's lap and smothered the computer screen with wet sloppy kisses.

"I miss you too, old girl," he cried, almost hugging his laptop.  "I miss you too..."


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This post is published for #OpenNTalk Blogger's League hosted by Dipika Singh of Gleefulblogger
Ruchie Verma - Wigglingpen in association with SummerBarnVedantika HerbalsNyassaExplore Kids World.

#OpenNTalk is a bloggers league wherein forty selected bloggers are divided into eight teams. Each team has five members, who will blog on varied topics during the month of June. Each blogger will post a series of four posts, one post every week. 

My team for the Bloggers League is #CrossBorderSisters, and blogging with me are my four other team mates namely
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24 comments:

  1. Just loved it and your words are like adhesive which make stick to the end of the story. Love is love which never ends.
    And end is quite good.
    #CrossBorderSisters #OpenNTalk

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  2. Loved the 'cheat n twist' in the end Priyanka!😉

    #CrossBorderSisters

    #OpenNTalk

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  3. Loved the story & its flow.... #NISSATalks

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  4. Oh man...Never saw the end coming this way! You are a creative yarn spinner for sure Priyanka.

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  5. That is a bit different ending than expected. As I was reading, my mind was guessing what will come next. And then came the "golden retriever". Ahh, nice twist Priyanka.

    – Anami from #InvincibleGang for #OpenNTalk #Week4

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  6. oh no!! its a dog :)The way you have created the climax is just amazing.

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  7. Really sweet story! Lovely writing.
    #OpenNTalk #JAMSS2018

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  8. SO sweet. Truly mans true friends are his pets.


    #Bloggingdivas for #OpenNTalk

    https://iheartmypresent.blogspot.com/

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  9. Haha..loved the twist at the end. Completely unexpected. #Bloggingdivas #Openntalk

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  10. @ Bhawna
    Thanks dear. I’m glad you liked it 😘

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  11. @ Aditi
    Thanks Aditi. I wanted to keep it real! 😉

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  12. @ Silja
    Thank you. I’m glad you did 😊

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  13. @ Anagha Yatin
    Thanks Anagha. I'm happy I can atleast spin something right! 😉

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  14. @ Anami
    Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it 😁

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  15. @ Sayeri
    Thanks. I’m glad I could maintain your curiosity till the end! 😜

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  16. @ Deliciously alive
    Merci Beaucoup! ☺️

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  17. @ Zeffirra
    Man’s best friend indeed!
    Thanks for dropping by 😊

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  18. @ Deepa
    Thanks dear. I’m glad you enjoyed it! 😁

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  19. haha that was an interesting twist. very well narrated. #NISSATALKS sudha

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  20. Hahaha what an innovative short and cute story. I smiled reading the climax :)
    I am a dog lover too, I can co-relate to this situation. Thanks for this one, I miss my neighbor's day back in Pune at mom's place who always came seeing my bike or me :) wagging his tail.
    #InvincibleGang

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  21. Manisha: It was good kahani mein twist but loved the story, kept me hooked till the end.#CrossBorderSisters #OpenNTalk

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  22. @ Sudha
    Thanks Sudha. I’m glad it got you laughing 😁

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  23. @ Yogeeta
    The pleasure is mine, dear. I’m glad this brought back a fond memory! 😊

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  24. @ Manisha
    Thanks Manisha. I’m glad you liked it ❤️

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