Its a magic world around i see,
a magic chest with a magic key...
a little here and some more there,
a lotta magic for everyone to share...
the magic of love of which all know,
the very reason for that warmth,that glow...
the one which keeps us smiling all through,
that eternal magic of an 'i love u'...
the magic of hope which keeps alive a spark,
enough to rekindle a fire in the dark...
the hope that a better tomorrow awaits,
a 'tomorrow' which wont succumb to our fates...
the one which heals broken hearts ever since...
the magic which can change a pauper to a prince,
one which can make millions from a well saved dime,
that my friend, is the magic of time...
one which can move great mountains they say,
and can only grow stronger with each passing day...
something which tells us its never too late,
that something is the magic of faith...
the magic which comes with a friendship dear,
is the love of a friend,the company of a peer...
u can count on it but hurt it never,
cos if broken it may vanish forever...
and so i say its a magic world out here,
just enjoy it and let go of every fear...
each second will bring to u a magic new,
but remember,the real magic is the one within u...
(as u must have noticed, ive pretty much fallen in love with the word 'magic'... *grin*)
PROMPT taken from 'writers island'
35 comments:
LOVELY AND CAN I mail you something on gmail?
Am feeling all magical and charged up after reading this ;) Magic within I yet to discover and Magic of love discovered and lost.
Whoa!!!
Magical;)
Keep it rollin;)
We can look on life in two ways. There's the wrong way. Then there's yours.
You have captured the surprise of magic. It is anywhere and everywhere!
Just lovely!
Smiles and Light
wonderful words. made a great start to my otherwise gloomy day doccc
oi... been watching harry potter of late or did u go arnd to a magic show???
anywyz, petrificus totalus.. dats teh charm for u... dat wud keep ur "magic" in control for a while u know...
or may be expecto patronum shud do the trick... :P
nice poem though..
on a serious note we all need a lil bit of magic to see us through in an otherwise boring day!! :)
You've caught the meaning of magic perfectly. A lovely piece.
The optimism is nice.
@ kaylee
thanks dear and u can mail me anytime...u dont need to ask :)
@ mez
glad it made a difference :)
hope u rediscover the magic of love soon and all the very best to discover the magic within u...
@ scribs
thanks...really appreciated :)
@ anthonynorth
thanks for that...no matter what,an optimistic approach does make life seem beautiful :)
gemma wiseman
thanks...it was a humble attempt to do so :)
and ur absolutely right...magic is all around us...we just gotta take notice...
*smiles*
@ ashu
glad it was of some help...
no better compliment than brightening up someones day :)
take care dear!
@ sam
neither sam...just learning to appreciate magic and its really is wonderful to feel it all around me :)
try it...will surely brighten up ur day...and a few others too :)
@ keith hillman
that means a lot to me...esp when its coming from someone like u :)
love ur poetry...
@ noahthegreat
well an optimistic outlook is the best one to have :)
thanks or dropping by...
er!! when i heard the song on yur blog.. I knew.. u were feeling all "i will jump in the air" kinds :)
magic is in the air... and I lov the smell of it :)
I loved it I loved it I loved !!!!
Girl...you're superb...
I generally manage to find out a favorite stanza most of the times...but here I had a hard time trynna find out...
The whole package was was so very rocking !!!!!!!!
I have a smile now...yes, the magic of time...
I am sorry but your music is too loud for me to enjoy reading your post. Blessings, Cricket
Just loved these lines dear...
and so i say its a magic world out here,
just enjoy it and let go of every fear...
each second will bring to u a magic new,
but remember,the real magic is the one within u...
No docubt....all magic is in you....and u said it so beutifully,hopefully people do understand it as well:-))
oh the magic of creation .. for example ..music .. and the magic that it is ..nd the magic that it does .. I tell u ..even doctors fail ..hehehe :P
I have to say that you are right. Magic does live on inside all of us. It is up to all of us to make our magic and our destiny. Great piece.
A lovely and magical list of inspiration! Magic does have a nice ring! Good read!
@ veens
thanks dear..and heyy dont always go by the music on my blog :D
this time ur right though...
@ cindrella
thanku thanku thanku...heehee...i dunno what to say...im speechless and still on cloud 9...now thats the magic of 'flattery' :p
@ crickets hearth
a thousand apologies for the loud music...have now taken it off from my blog :)...but u could plain switch it off though...
neverthless thanks for dropping by...
@ chakoli
thanks...and im sure everyone would realise it if they havent already...its jus a matter of time before we discover ourself :)
@ anuj
have to agree with u on that boss! :D
@ jadey
bingo!! :)
thanks for dropping by...
@ tumblewords
thanku for the kind words :)
you captured all elements of magic. Truly magical
YOU ROCK, PRI!!!!
Words fail me,when i read your poems!
U manage to leave me speechless every single time.
KEEP BLOGGIN !!!!
Lotsa love and blessings:)
@ marja
thanks marja..i tried to..but magic springs surprises at us every second...u can never capture it all :)
@ mary poppins
im flattered...thanku :)
and secondly theres something magical about ur id...it has managed to evoke the innocence of my childhood...i loved 'mary poppins' as a kid ...
thanks for the smile u got me :)
the magic of hope which keeps alive a spark,
enough to rekindle a fire in the dark...
the hope that a better tomorrow awaits,
a 'tomorrow' which wont succumb to our fates...
This was the best :).. liked it a lot
that was magical use of word magic! ;)
very cool and well versed....nice work doc...
but i cant simply comment serious can i - so here goes....
i do sicnerely hope that if i do ever have to see you profeesionaly as a patient - you dont remove your wand instead of the sthetoscope...and say abracadabra - there goes your pain and suffering :)
lovely..
this magic I liked, so much optimism and full of hope, lovely.
@ rambler
thanks rambler :)
may the magic of hope always spring pleasant surprises our way...
cheers!
@ sach
well , a lil of it has brushed off on me...so couldent help it ;)
@ ceedy
heehee u never know ceedy, medicine+magic would make a wonderful combination...
i could make u dissapear if u crack too many of ur pj's...heehee (now now i know what ur thinking---u couldent beat this one (pj) *grin*)
@ littlewing
thanks for dropping by littlewing :)
@ ul
thanku ul...was trying to spread the magic around in my own lil way :)
brilliant doc....that made my evening :)
magical optimism. I like that!
super... made me smile :)
"and so i say its a magic world out here,
just enjoy it and let go of every fear...
each second will bring to u a magic new,
but remember,the real magic is the one within u..."
I loved it, and i fell in love with the word "magic" too :)
@ ceedy
:)
@ gautami tripathy
thanks dear :)
optimism always comes with a magical ting...
@ vandita
im glad it did :)
@ lena
now thats the magic of 'magic' :)
Hello Islander –
This is a note to tell you I’m genuinely happy to see you on the Island. I founded the Island originally as a temporary destination for those of us set adrift when Poetry Thursday sunk. But the Island has flourished… because of writers, like you, who come to enjoy the tropical breeze, and just write -- for the sheer pleasure of it! So, the beaches remain open, and all are most welcome!
Poetry Thursday is now ReadWritePoem. Check them out if you haven’t. The crew at Totally Optional Prompts is doing a fine job. Both are excellent writing destinations.
I am slowed a bit with back pain. This has hampered my time at my computer -- so, I have not been able to read many of the posts. I will catch up when I’m steadier at the helm. I am dictating this to my wife, who will kindly post it for me. Kathy is a dear!
See you on the island. I have a prompt for this Friday I think should spark some fun and interesting writing.
May your muse be kind…
…Rob
W.I.
@ writers island
well firstly congratulations on the success of WI...its a real nice idea and does making blogging more fun...its also wonderful interacting with other bloggers around here :)
looking forward to take up the new prompt ...
i remain,
just another islander
pri :)
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